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Genetics sketch (SEE IM WORKING)

August 8th, 2017, 4:22 pm
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ShadowStalker1128 August 8th, 2017, 4:25 pm
I'm not being completely unproductive. See?
I really like Dusty but I can't draw Breezeclaw.
I'm not sure what I'm doing wrong; would someone please enlighten me ;-;

Anyways now I gotta go read *checks title*... The Secret Life of Bees
...
Why mom
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9rainbowtails August 8th, 2017, 4:29 pm
OH I've read that book! It get's really enthralling in the middle!

Also Yay Shadow!
ShadowStalker1128 August 8th, 2017, 4:33 pm
@9rainbowtails: it does? OH, good :3
I was a little worried when I read the back
WiFi on the go (Guest) August 8th, 2017, 4:31 pm
Hi Shad
Not home atm
Be back soon and then I'll give advice
TheJGamer August 8th, 2017, 4:57 pm
more productive than me lol
WildfireK August 8th, 2017, 5:38 pm
I think it's the eyes.
You see how Dusty's eyes are rounded the top but Breezeclaw's aren't? Maybe that's why, because even with the raised eyebrows, Breezeclaw's eyes are sorta closed, making her look kinda smug or relaxed instead of fully awake and teaching

Also maybe it's because you're putting teeth for Breezlaw but none for Dusty? That gives Dusty a more cartoony, emotive visage while Breezlaw is more realistic
ShadowStalker1128 August 8th, 2017, 5:47 pm
@WildfireK: ah
Okay thanks
I guess it's because Breezeclaw is supposed to look relaxed
And that makes her expressionless compared to a very expressive Dusty
WildfireK August 8th, 2017, 5:49 pm
@ShadowStalker1128:
Personally I like Breezeclaw in the last panel
But it seems like Breezeclaw in the second has a lot more chin
Maybe it you made the fur stop a little bit higher and then made the jaw like you did in the last panel?
Oh yeah maybe chin needs to be way thinner
Or
Wait
Aahhh perspective messes it uppl
WildfireK August 8th, 2017, 5:51 pm
@ShadowStalker1128:
HOLD ON IVE GOT IT

So you see how the fur in laat panel a concave sort of c shape?
If you look at the second it's not there
I think if you make the c shape then it will look better
ShadowStalker1128 August 8th, 2017, 6:52 pm
@WildfireK: ahhh okay!